MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK. Comments

The advice you give is good.

You are bold and very definite but I got lost in your flow. Your message wasn't lost just misplaced. I found it but if you simplify your description for us dummies, like me, you would wow people.

Do not mind, I think in my view you have talent which is shaping up. I love your poems, kindly alert me when you make a new posting. We can build some poems together. Always invite critics like me to look at your owrks then re-visit your poem thereafterand improve it further. I keep on revising my poems depending on the comments I get.Not all comments are constructive anyway

Awesome poems u are a very good writer! ! ! keep writing

Nivedita is a voice of voiceless people. She uses so technical words to explain bio physical bawl. words are few but they carry immense meaning. In her poem divinity dances, infinity emerges and perpetuity germinates. I found her poem are not only the by product of psychological itching, they carries a metamorphic message too.

Dear Nivedita I have read your poems many times over. You are an Uncut Diamond, Niv! ! It needs polishing... You are definitely a new voice on the horizon. And that voice is powerful. It will be heard. If a dog barks its heart out in a Crowded Street, that bark may not be heard even two streets away. But if a Lion gives even a Solitary Roar from his Solitary Cave, that roar is heard even miles away. You are that Lioness, Niv. But you have to work hard....Work constantly on your idiom, dear Nivvy, until it has that deep, unmistakable, cultivated roar....And then have patience... A controlled moderate stream of water can cut through even Six Inch Thick Steel. But a wayward spray of water, however powerful, may not even cut a single hole in the ground.... (yes... I deliberately used the words Six Inches....) You are an Uncut Diamond, dear Niv! ! You need polishing.....

as if you are asking for rape

I just wanna say I like this poem and argree with the cause, but anyway I do will sound stupid compared to the other comments on this, espeisally with spelling errors I KNOW there will be.... with my luck, you see.

** ORIGINAL MESSAGE ******************** ======================================== From: Rajendran Muthiah To: Nivedita [poet Under Threat Of Editorial Cannibalism Date-Time: 9/9/2012 8: 37: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Threat of Editorial Cannibalism ---------- Why you are under the threat of editorial cannibalism? You have the right to say/write what you hate in nice language. Your strength of diction in biological sciences is surprising. In 30 yrs, you have got this much of talents to write verses where no one can make amends. I am envy of your poetic magic. Only Islam denies rights to argue about things crooked or hateful. If anybody dares to make fun of some outdated ideas, they take guns to shoot. O.K. Best wishes dear. ======= Hon'ble Poet Rajendran Muthiah-ji Nameste-ji [1] I'm highly indebted to you for all your encouragements to be steady on the Platform of Poetic Truth [PoPT] and I make no compromise to it, may be I'm become a 'Stand-Alone' what I felt earlier. [2] Once I was abused ‘Verbally’ thro' scribbles comments [Personally] on my poems [Read Inaesthetic Global Pollution &c] by a ‘Mentally Challenged’ so called poet in PH. But trounces of comments added muscles to my stand on PoPT. [3] Here not end of story the [un] wise PH banned my Poem I Want To Be Raped [1+14 words Poetry] &c those needed several typographical changes to keep upheld my PoPT ultimately by same trounce of comments by my Hon'ble Readers the PH gave in. Now PH playing foul play [instead of fair-play] by constraining me to post my comments on other poets what I've to do in the mail-box of poets in PH. Look I'd to take to post this comment of your's I'd to take help of my Hon'ble reader Mr. AB London who tirelessly does for me and I sincerely thank him. Kindest regards ~ niv +++ Copy to Hon’ble Poet Rajendran Muthiah-ji Nameste-ji ~~~~ Posted thro’ courtesy of AB London

Society needs Niv. a brave brilliant and daring thinker and writer. She will wash out all past and create a new for the coming generation.

======================================== ** ORIGINAL MESSAGE ******************** ======================================== From: indrater Exuberant To: Nivedita [poet Under Threat Of Editorial Cann Date-Time: 7/17/2012 11: 28: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: No Comments! ! ! ! ---------- i am reading and reading and re-reading and re-reading your poems. i am stunned by your power words and your immaculate style - world class. i am spellbound....speechless.... mesmerized! I'll have to explore your poems to a greater depth to be able to make a critique! Bless your time, dear poet! ~~~~ Posted by courtesy of AB London

======================================== ** ORIGINAL MESSAGE ******************** ======================================== From: Kamrup Muse To: Nivedita [poet Under Threat Of Editorial Cann Date-Time: 6/19/2012 4: 07: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: hii ---------- hi your poems are frankly original, , , and only a bold poet lik eu can pen, , u r a kamala das of poem hunter +++++++ Unfortunately I've to take help of my reader AB to post comment by stubborn PH by constrain comments except In Box Ms. niv

I call her Sister Niv. She is very young, talented, and brave poetess. I admire her contribution because she is expressing her opinions boldly and openly. Niv. endeavor to make the human society more realistic thro her poems. we can see a person being treated like beast. we can not ignore and deny phoolan devi and i think it is nothing. but really it is more than what we see or read. so contribution of Niv. is always praiseworthy.

The Rape of the Lock, The Rape of the Bucket or Le Secchi Rapita are satirical poems. But the poem ' entitled 'I want to be raped' is a thought provoking poem with special message of the poet to the readers. The use of the word 'necromant ' adds to the horror that the poetess wanted to focus on. I am really happy that there is at least one female poet who raised the social issue that makes us all greatly concerned. Congrats Nivedita, carry on with more such poetic ventures

The poem-“I want to be raped “by Nivedita Bagchi SPC is a bold, beautiful and thoughtful poem. There is a chance of misinterpretation of the message of this poem by casual readers, but I do feel feel the essence of the poem. It deserve the attention of the civic society. The core value of the message of this poem certainly lead us to think again on social crime committed by so called civilized society.. Apart from this, this is a well crafted creation, I believe..# Braja K Sarkar

A bold, beautiful and thoughtful poem. There is a chance of misinterpretation of the message of this poem by casual readers, but I do feel feel the essence of the poem. It deserve the attention of the civic society. The core value of the message of this poem certainly lead us to think again on social crime committed by so called civilized society.. Apart from this, this is a well crafted creation, I believe.

I believe we all go through this stage, hence you don't have to worry. I am inspired by your poem that is called ~ ‘Sister Don't Give Me Opiate I Want To Taste Death' ~ [Drama in Real Life].

Do you mean that i am the one for the nomination...Hence, have a nice weekend. Your correspondence will be highly appreciated. Have a nice day!

This poem/poet is illegal ones; Caution/Attention needed on Inspiration/Morals.

amazing......! ! ! ! Thank you poet you have something special within!